批改我的英语作文

Nowadays, more and more children prefer eating meat better than green vegetables。第二个eating太多余了。 declivous应为delicious a fifteen year old 应为 a fifiteen-year-old； And应该小写前面改成逗号,或者改成What's more, vagetables...。 lots前面加上since/because连成一句比较好。 如